Dillon’s 100 Word Challenge – Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

When I woke up this morning I went into the toilet. I couldn’t help realise that there was an orange cat in my bath. This to me was very mysterious especially since the cat separated the bath from the rest of the house. I thought it was a dream at first but when I realised that it wasn’t I ran and tripped over a wire which was orange as well. The next door neighbour came looking mysteriously at me. As the streets began to shake we realised that it was separating from the rest of the ground. That’s when I woke up.

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Teacher of Mathematics and Joint Form Tutor of 8M
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One Response to Dillon’s 100 Word Challenge – Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

  1. Mr Turner says:

    Well done Dillon. You’ve written a good story. Your sentences all make sense and you’ve punctuated it correctly too. Next time, with the longer sentences you’ve written, re-read it to yourself, to check if it needs a comma.

    I look forward to reading more of your entries in the future.

    Mr Turner (Team 100wc)

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