Elliott’s 100 Word Challenge Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

One day 2 orange cats went out to buy a bath from a mysterious shop, but when they went in it was a pet shop and the cats got separated. They both got put in big boxes with other cats, but because the box was see-through they could see each other. Because they were both orange they both got out and were together. They both snuck out, went to the shop next door, got their bath, brung it home, went in it and the 2 orange cats washed the orange away and were both black and white.

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Teacher of Mathematics and Joint Form Tutor of 8M
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One Response to Elliott’s 100 Word Challenge Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

  1. Ross Mannell says:

    Hello Elliott,

    I see you managed to use all five prompt words in the first sentence. I believe I can understand your thinking. This allows you to concentrate more on the story than where the prompt words can be placed.

    🙂 I like your storyline. The cats, I think, are more mysterious than the shop. Apart from the loss of colour, cats don’t tend to like baths. I was left wondering why the cats appeared orange when they were really black and white. Your twist at the end of your story was unexpected.

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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