Kieran’s 100 Word Challenge Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

I was just taking a bath when I realised I hadn’t done my homework for tomorrow. I quickly got out and rushed to my homework before I had to go to sleep. We had to write a story so I wrote ‘The mysterious adventures of the orange cat’. I was starting to enjoy writing weird things that could happen to a cat when I had to go to bed. I left my mostly finished work on top of some other papers on the side. The next morning I couldn’t find my homework anywhere! I found out that my mum hadn’t separated it from the papers she was shredding. Uh-oh!

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About Mr Collins

Teacher of Mathematics and Joint Form Tutor of 8M
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One Response to Kieran’s 100 Word Challenge Week #23 (bath, mysterious, orange, cat, separated)

  1. Oh dear! What a disaster! Great way to end your story. It would be great if you could include more emotions in your story so it’s more than just a list of events.

    Emma (100wc team)

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